All Comments on 'Out of The Shadows Ch. 02'

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Boyd Percy 3 months ago

What a revolting development this is!

RanDog025 3 months ago

I think it's going quite well, just life's lessons! 5 BIG ASS STARS! Thanks.

Ironman52 3 months ago

Kinda short. Hope the next chapter comes out soon!

WhoGivesAShit 3 months ago

Definitely short. It barely sets the hook.

Bh76 3 months agoAuthor

It is short, but it felt like a natural stopping point. The next chapter is longer and meatier.

Anonymous3 months ago

Melanie needs to grow up. Joe deserves better.

oldmanbill69 3 months ago

Sounds like Gen Z.

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2/9/24: Out of the Shadows is finally ready and dropping soon. My long-awaited sequel to Heart is Where the Home Is and Living In the Shadows picks up where Living left off and continues the saga of Mel, Joe, Lainey, Ken, and the rest of the gang. My patreon supporters have al...

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