All Comments on 'Out of the Window'

by cardman314

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JessmartinJessmartin4 months ago

Great continuation of the story, nothing to envy of the original.

JeepsterdJeepsterd4 months ago

Love it! Great continuation!

lancelot_68lancelot_684 months ago

Great piece!

and it shows a good sense of humor, which is realy appreciated.

Keep the good works coming!

xzg_ltrtcxzg_ltrtc4 months ago

Really nice addition to the original story and the Big D universe.

Karen_48Karen_483 months ago

This was a great continuation to the original story. Please keep writing and publishing. You do a great job.

Joe_Doe_StoriesJoe_Doe_Storiesabout 2 months ago

Thank you for the great expansion of this particular corner of the universe. I was particularly fond of her parents reaction, and their insistence of giving the doorman a much deserved treat. After having suffered through her willful daughter's teenage years, her mother isn't exactly hating seeing Natalie put in her place. WELL DONE!!

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