All Comments on 'Out West Ch. 16: Farewell to Arms'

Whether we live for love or die for love, love itself will never die.

We will miss Martha, but we won't if we let her be in our hearts forever.

In Martha's world, former enemies on the battlefield become friends and brothers, and their wives become each other's lovers.

May they all follow Pixie's and Evie's example of lovemaking, so beautifully described here. May this be Martha's legacy.

As they used to say on the stage: "Follow that!" Two things to say about this: it's probably your best series (and that is saying something!); and it was a very touching conclusion to the story, it left me with a great lump in my throat. Simply superb, Pixie.

My dearest Pixie it is bittersweet to end our journey with our friend. I love them all, and will miss them terribly. Time and change molded them and us. No matter what comes I hope you will treasure this effort as much as I. It has been a highlight in my life. I hope there will be more. Love, your Serrada

Thank you MamaS. This is OUR story and I am so glad we did it. I am saddened by recent events as you know, but this stands as a tribute xxxxx

Thank you darling Maonaigh, I am so touched that you enjoyed it so much. It was difficult to end it in this way in many senses, but as you will know, sometimes these things just come and one goes with them xxxxx

Thank you darling Amadeus, and as we come to the end of this saga of growth and redemption, it is good to remember that it is indeed love that redeems us all xxxxxx

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Though this is NOT how I would have preferred this story end, it was unquestionably moving. My tears can attest to that. It's a good thing that my device has a protective case, because I may have shorted it out otherwise. The HEA( Happy Eternally After) offered some much needed consolation after Martha's sudden passing in Kate's loving arms. (Dammit, I'm tearing up again). Beautiful and bittersweet. Thank you Pixiehoff and SerradaC.

Thank you Anonymous. Try as we did, S and I could find no other way - sometimes stories take on lives of their own and one goes with them. Your tears were preceded by mine xxxxxx

Those words have never rung truer than in this chapter, in which I too shed tears and felt a large lump in my throat. I can honestly say that this series was magnificent in every way. Thank you, Pixiehoff and SerradaC, for writing such an exquisite story. May the memory of Martha Anderson live on forever.

Thank you so much OneAuthor, we have followed them on their journey and seen growth and development - with a glimpse into what came next, and I am glad you have been with us throughout xxxx

Dear Pixie,

I completed and attached Pixies Dream Story-Part 9 – SUB1 Briefs Her Pick-Up Plan- Part A for your review / edit / approval.

This story part briefs the SUB1’s pick-up plan for Queen Marie Antoinette, Jane Austen, and William Shakespeare from your Influential People’s List. Part B of this story chapter will brief the pick-up plan for the remaining four names on your Influential People’s List.

This Part A chapter also requires input from Pixie and describes more interesting things added to her transport vehicle. Plus, I thought of more things to add to your vehicle.

This chapter also proposes an additional mission with Queen Marie Antoinette and questions to ask Jane Austen, and William Shakespeare.

I wish you would tell me what you plan to do with your Dream Story. Your non-responses only hint that your Dream Story will end up in the recycle bin, where I presume my other two stories found their fate.

Please Enjoy Your Day and Stay Safe,

Anonymous

OUTSTANDING & LOVE!!!!!!

Anonymous - thank you so much, I am so glad you enjoyed it xxxx

Dear Pixie,

Where do you suggest looking for Apostille Junia, if we cannot locate her with Apostille Paul in the Philippi, Greece prison in CE / AD 51 during Paul's second trip?

We could try Jerusalem or the Vatican Library, in Rome, for clues.

Other than that, I do not know where to look.

Are there any other places, that I over-looked?

I apologize for my terrible social skills,

I only care about completing a commitment, that I made to a dear friend and her Dream.

Anonymous

Congratulations to Emma Raducanu for winning he 2021 US Open women's singles title, and becoming the first British woman to win a Grand Slam title since Virginia Wade won Wimbledon in 1977.

This chapter took me much longer to read, my eyes being less functional because of the tears and my throat gasping for breath. So, a little bit longer enjoying this beautiful tale.

Dear writers, you did well, you did more than well. Good girls!

Thank you!

Thank you so much Cindy, and much of the credit goes to Serrada whose creation Martha is xxxxx

What a dramatic end ...... Really this bloody bullet was moving or had to move? ...... Sitting here and crying like a little and no end for tears to fall ..."... Im so taken by your magic Lady Pixiehoff and im helpless with my soul ........ If those stories would be more clinical more outstanding but you touching life and feelings and hearts and souls so easily ...... That should be left as a compliment, but more my mushy brain can not form in words

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Oh my darling one, I am glad that you have followed to the end - and I hope you see now why Martha had to die xxxxx