All Comments on 'Overly Familiar Pt. 02 Ch. 05'

Aphrodite being a tease... does he have the juice to put an orgasm blocking spell on her? Everytime she tries to tease/tempt him she gets another week of nogasms. Is that too evil?

If it isn't apparently obvious, I love this story and your presentation, so-much-so that I've probably reread the entire story 4 or 5 times now. Found out I was into petplay as well, which will give me something to explore later. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Made an account, but Kerberos was taken, so I had to be add to it.

-Kerberos

I like the other persons comment about an orgasm suppression spell

Three straight chapters of sexing up familiars but precious little plot advancement. Maybe I’m alone on this but I prefer sex encounters to be the spice sprinkled in a actual story and not the main course. I skimmed the last couple chapters but hopefully next chapter you’ll get back on track and not waste the promising start this story had.

It’s a fine story. It started out with a ton or promise. Finding a creature that turned into perfect hot girl. Then the angel is best friend. Then they appear to have a war with heaven coming but then nope one small fight is all. They become horsemen which is awesome idea but it’s not used. Skip ahead to where they released a lot of trapped muses but we don’t get be a part of that experience except for one short time. Now it’s nothing but sex and hey I know you’re horny but you had a chance to make an epic story. Battle heaven and hell, maybe, with sex worked in but oh well. Plenty of folks will enjoy another all sex story. As long as you enjoy writing it go for it.

I’m now reduced to giving pointless 2 stars for pointless dead end chapters.