All Comments on 'Overstepping The Line'

by OneEyedSteve

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harmonicksharmonicks4 months ago

Great story, hope you write more like this!

Robincd1126Robincd11264 months ago

Great story, TY!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Perfect pacing and very hot. Mia is a total temptress modeling her tight shorts and sexy bras for her stepfather. She also knows that since they’ve crossed a line, she’s totally in charge now. She got off riding his cock, but she’s in control. Steve might come to realize this and become absolutely terrified..(poor baby- giggles). Mia could destroy him…

JT

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I agree Great Story. Please wite more. They certainly need to fuck like rabbits or make love whenever mom is away.

Red_22bRed_22b4 months ago

Great story. Hoping you share some more with us.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good story, but there are several grammatical errors. Have someone proofread your work!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story. Hope to read more.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good story, need spell check or a proof reader to help you out. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale3 months ago

Pretty well done. I liked it.

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