All Comments on 'Owing Rent'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
that was hot...

very descriptive writing...loved it and hope for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Such a great writer. Hope there’s more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love it! Please keep it going

LuvyoungwivesLuvyoungwives9 months ago

Great, i moved into my flat at 18 very shy petite body,usually when im alone drink alcohol few beers,im more relaxed and talk more,but still a bit shy meeting new people, one evening around 8pm,my nextdoor oldguy knocked, i opened door,he introduced himself, he is bigsid and 75yold he noticed that he had saw me moving in but never out,i just like my own company sometimes, oh im gerrard 18yold im trying to find work,ok home 24h a day,i must be lonely by now, im going to bar below the flat he do i want cum for a beer or two ,he can introduce me to his old pals,cmon wont hurt,might be surprisingly good, he said hes sure that i will be attended to, ok he said, he will be back in 10,giving me time to get dressed,white tshirt,jeans on ue is back telling me that not many guys in the bar,that means bar is closing early,the barman going home,but we can have a pint and double whiskyand meet his 2 friends, 30min later after being in bar,whisky is making me feel slightly drunk,im sitting between 3 old fat pensioners, not notice my tight ass is being touched, by one guy telling me,i have a nice young butt, bar closed,im invited to join them for more beer,ok said but would they mind if i go put my casual cothes on,ok so get my jeans off and get my loose shorts on,i never wear underwear,

LuvyoungwivesLuvyoungwives9 months ago

Mmmmmmm yes please xxx

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Lets read about next month, when he still can't pay because his car broke down and he had to get it fixed....

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Ok but wanted more fighting. He's too submissive

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

I wish my tenants were as accommodating .My agents never ask.

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Just a man writing stories. I have realised that I like writting shorter stories more. I also write some stuff on chyoa, under the username themutant: https://chyoa.com/user/themutant