All Comments on 'Owned by The Boss Ch. 01'

Great concept and start. I just wish there was more.

Surely just the tip of the iceberg of submission that lives in you. Get on your knees and admit it

Maître Pol

Great story. Perhaps a bit short and you might look into help with editing. But please keep writing! I’d love to read more.

Great job, please continue to write but be mindful of keeping it first person throughout 😁

Too short!

This type of story actually I would hope would be placed in the Sci Fi category, as the main premise , which is largely fantastic (the genre) is the whole justification for all events. Who is not consenting to "the law", here?