All Comments on 'Owning a Maid Harem Ch. 07'

Boring.

Agree with @Silvermire here. This story is going to the pits.

You need to read other stories from the Author, They some times take a few chapters to get smooth but once he knows where he is taking the Characters its all good.

What happened to time manipulation mind control? I saw that ot was removed, does anyone know where I should go to read it now?

More story less monotonous sex scenes

A little bit of constructive criticism. I know this is Literotica and sex is the game but I agree, more story endless sex. You may be a good writer but you could become brilliant, balance in my view is one of the key factors. You still haven’t learnt how to balance your stories, once you learnt that you’ll be well on your way.

I'm curious what happened to his uncle's prior maids. As I understand they didn't just die, but spending all their time with him, they pretty much gave up their prior friends and family. I suppose they would have had each other, but was there a trust or something to take care of them? Of course, the same thing will occur once he passes.