by mypenname3000
While yes, this is an erotica site, not every chapter NEEDS to have sex in it. Some plot and character development would heighten the sex scenes. Also you are still rambling on and on repeating the same things over and over again in different words. It makes things artificially extended without adding anything of substance.
Pretty good, but every sexual encounter reads almost like every other sexual encounter. It's become pretty formulaic.
What’s happening with aunt Nancys two daughters? Or have you forgotten about them? Won’t they be wondering where their mother is ? Will they end up as minor maids in this story? He’s fucking his mum fucking his auntie why not fuck his cousins. Nothing like keeping it all in the family as they say. Just a thought.