All Comments on 'Owning a Maid Harem Ch. 09'

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Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettalmost 2 years ago

While yes, this is an erotica site, not every chapter NEEDS to have sex in it. Some plot and character development would heighten the sex scenes. Also you are still rambling on and on repeating the same things over and over again in different words. It makes things artificially extended without adding anything of substance.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Pretty good, but every sexual encounter reads almost like every other sexual encounter. It's become pretty formulaic.

Hildor80Hildor80almost 2 years ago

You know the basic plot of this could make a cool show.

Aussie1951Aussie19518 months ago
Nancy’s two daughters???

What’s happening with aunt Nancys two daughters? Or have you forgotten about them? Won’t they be wondering where their mother is ? Will they end up as minor maids in this story? He’s fucking his mum fucking his auntie why not fuck his cousins. Nothing like keeping it all in the family as they say. Just a thought.

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...

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