by mypenname3000
I need more 😭 You tease me with one chapter for weeks and then just a tiny bit more. It’s not even the erotica, I want to know all the lore now, I’m so curious about Cali ! My only criticism is this story can get a bit convoluted and confusing at times. Other than that I am so excited to continue reading. I want more about history of the family and the creatures.
You have an ongoing problem of forgetting whether the person thinking or talking is male or female and attributing the wrong body parts to them.