All Comments on 'Owning a Maid Harem Ch. 24'

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muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Way too many characters and the story has just gotten too weird,

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I disagree. The story is just now getting started. If you don’t like a little fantasy, too bad .3

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Idc what anyone thinks but this is the best sex story ever! Cant wait for the next chapter to come out

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yup. More of the same dumb hero getting even dumber. Rushes to save someone, but spends 5 odd pages doing nothing but poking characters so shallow, the might as well be blow up dolls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yeah. Pretty much penname3000 crap. Like the later ASSTR days. Pity, early works were so much better. After a while the story divolves into a "I got a harem, now let's NTR/destroy/murder the shit out of it!" arc.

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...

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