by mypenname3000
I disagree. The story is just now getting started. If you don’t like a little fantasy, too bad .3
Idc what anyone thinks but this is the best sex story ever! Cant wait for the next chapter to come out
Yup. More of the same dumb hero getting even dumber. Rushes to save someone, but spends 5 odd pages doing nothing but poking characters so shallow, the might as well be blow up dolls.
Yeah. Pretty much penname3000 crap. Like the later ASSTR days. Pity, early works were so much better. After a while the story divolves into a "I got a harem, now let's NTR/destroy/murder the shit out of it!" arc.
Next!