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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderful! Vet erotic............keep up the good

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
First Person, Present Tense Writing Sucks

Stop the insanity.

ProfWriterProfWriterover 16 years ago
Nice-forget the crayon wielder

Why would someone give you a zero score because they don't like First Person writing?

The zero reflects their inability to place themselves in the story and not the quality of the writing. PW

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Anything

I love anything written without cheating. Husband and wife love, nothing greater.

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