All Comments on 'Oz Beach Boy The Barbarian Ch. 01'

Woah, me likey this story! MORE MORE! <3 Wheee! \o/

This is amazing!

I liked this new type of story. Let the old lech Sage Tantelus have a go at Matt at some point. He needs some of that seed! Lol

I've enjoyed all your stories and I really liked the unexpected direction this one took. A fantasy written by a girl watching you/Matt at the pool was a creative idea and your writing is as evocative and erotic as ever. If I have one small constructive criticism, I would've liked to see the beginning of the story in your/Matt's point of view at the beginning. That would've kept it in line with your other works, then Matt could read the story where it would switch to 3rd person point of view. But that's a minor squabble. :) Amazing job as always and I can't wait to read the next part.