All Comments on 'Pamela And The Wardclerk'

made me hot.

This story didnt match my sexual fantasies, so cant comment on hotness. Also why I didnt vote on it.

You switch between present tense and past tense a lot, makes it difficult to read. Recommend you keep a thorough eye on what is past and what is present in future.

Mmh lost …. Some good scenes, great interplay … aside from inconsistencies mentioned earlier … But where does the overall plot line lead to? Not really a conclusive climax ending …. Sadly the author seems to have given up improving with more practice …