by tiedandteased
Don't take the other anonymous comments to heart. I wonder whether any of the authors have actually had the nerve to publish a story of their own. Wouldn't it be great to be able to snipe at their efforts. Anyway, I didn't find the lack of punctuation marks at all challenging and very much enjoyed the story.
you can tell a story but you clearly have no clue how to write one
I liked the story but there was no quotation marks around what the people were saying which made it hard to read
If she was counting the money. How is the envelop still sealed.