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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Poor writing. You went from first person to third person and back in one sentence so many times in this story. Proofread your writing before you submit it. It made it so very hard to read.

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Just a chubby, kind, nerd who wants to write sexy stories from my fantasies. If anyone is a fan of erotic writings, comics, or video games hit me up and we can chat! hahhah! Have a great day!

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