All Comments on 'Pandemic Pregnancy Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Quite the session of love making celebrating her news.

You have a fertile mind for the errotic. The timing is ideal and your focus on the task at hand commendable.

Now for another task . . . Please proof read your text. Numerous little things do come up. Anow example is his name: initially he is Menos, then Meno; a bit confusing for those of us not familiar with the name. A few words are dropped, perhaps from the excitement of writing such a hot story ?

Your talent is obvious, you write good sex! With concentration, so long as the sex stays good your writing will improve. Then, much like your couple, your stories will be well written and great !

Smelda64Smelda64over 2 years ago

I want more and also want to see what the family say when they find out

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Just a chubby, kind, nerd who wants to write sexy stories from my fantasies. If anyone is a fan of erotic writings, comics, or video games hit me up and we can chat! hahhah! Have a great day!

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