by y2juan
Quite the session of love making celebrating her news.
You have a fertile mind for the errotic. The timing is ideal and your focus on the task at hand commendable.
Now for another task . . . Please proof read your text. Numerous little things do come up. Anow example is his name: initially he is Menos, then Meno; a bit confusing for those of us not familiar with the name. A few words are dropped, perhaps from the excitement of writing such a hot story ?
Your talent is obvious, you write good sex! With concentration, so long as the sex stays good your writing will improve. Then, much like your couple, your stories will be well written and great !