All Comments on 'Paradise Ch. 01'

this got kinda off the wall, and ridiculous

To Anonymous...

Then stop reading it and move on.

To the original writer. You've started off well. Can't wait to see what you do with it.

Really enjoyed this! Hope to see more in the near future!

Turning all women into similar looking bimbos sounds kinda boring.

Strange and silly and completely hot and entertaining. You found the proper mix for a fun start. Can’t wait til more gets posted.

Wonderful start. 5 stars

The simulacrum/alternative world was a really bad twist. WTF's the point of he's not going to be effecting really people and her power isn't going to be effecting his own world?