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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is good! It’s feels good to have just a fantasy without drama

Discard457Discard457almost 3 years ago

I hope we get to see more characters that the main character has a history with, friends, family, friend group.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Will we ever see more of this awesome story?!?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This reads like a guy fucking a bunch of identical sex dolls.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

it starts out with people but then wipes them out and they might as well be fleshlights.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

It would be great if sometime a person writing a genie story had their hero wish for, in addition to a dick every woman wants, knowledge, wisdom and courage or similar things. It would make the story so much more interesting... Michelle.

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Come for the vibes, cum for the vibes The fourth installment of King of the Valkyries, a multi-chapter fantasy series, is out now. Feel free to leave a comment or reach out to me with your feedback, ideas, or anything, really! I love hearing from you guys, and it's always, al...

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