All Comments on 'Paradise Obtained Ch. 09'

What happens with the angle of Herr Haller inputting his own command to all the ladies? I mean when is Matt going to find that out and devise a countermeasure about it (if he does)?

Thanks for the comment Kurata Menor. That point will indeed be addressed, beginning (but not ending) in Chapter 10. This one is my 'long story' so I am pacing accordingly. For one thing, as readers of the Prologue will know, Matt's harem is not yet complete.

This is undoubtedly going to come back to bite him in the ass. That’s what happens when you allow yourself to lose the control that you once had.

Well done, I like that you have him facing some hurdles in this, nothing insurmountable yet though... I was happy to read below that this will be continuing for some time. Thank you!

Great story so far, can’t wait for more