All Comments on 'Paradise Obtained Ch. 00: Prologue'

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DaddydonthurtmeDaddydonthurtmealmost 3 years ago

Looking forward to chapter 1. Great setup

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great beginning and excellent job on describing everyone and their current interests. Looking forward to more.

J.D.

flynndflynndalmost 3 years ago

The next chapter should be linked

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

40C is basically a huge wide chest with quite small cups to go compared to it. Probably a lot of meat/fat on the back.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 1 year ago

Yes I have too agree great start great Description great characters so fat.. Now I look forward to a great story I hope... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

upyoursixupyoursix3 months ago

You start calling Tasha by tessa at the end, just fyi

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