All Comments on 'Paramour Polyamory Ch. 01: Briana'

The first chapter of Paramour Polyamory is a passionate drama, with a good introduction and a fine introduction to the characters. The plot proceeds at a pace that is neither too rushed nor too plodding, and the result is a first-rate love story. The chapter ends too abruptly, but perhaps this is just to allow it to be tied in to a second chapter. With this story, one can also see an improvement in the style and grammar of the writer, and, hopefully this will continue in the future.