All Comments on 'Past Loves Ch. 08: Bella and Huitzi'

Given the power dynamic of the last few chapters, I approached this setting with some trepidation. :P But this was a refreshing call-back to the start of the series, and Chapter 2 specifically. I have a particular soft spot for authors that can convey sensuality with minimal dialogue, and short as this is, it doesn't feel forced. If you do ever revisit this series for expansion, this chapter would be at the top of my list—I don't know -much- about the history of New Spain, but up north, many early English settlers realized the native communities lived a lot freer than their own colonies.

Also, kudos for avoiding the obvious "Big Oyster" pun. ;)

Great one, the freedom of nudity with not a soul around suddenly continues past the sexual peak, where glistening brown skin meets white with (in my imagination) slight sunburn and a few cute freckles