All Comments on 'Pathways to Submission Pt. 01'

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Cindy1001 10 months ago

Very nice start of what I think are 5 (?) could be equally exciting narratives. I would have preferred to follow one narrative from start to finish in one go, but since you're at the helm, I will follow.

RachaelJane 10 months agoAuthor

Thanks. My plan with this series is to write a set of 1,000-word introductions with a common theme. I will develop one or more of them into full stories as time goes on.

Anonymous10 months ago

Great intros. I particularly enjoyed 1 & 5, although 4 does have potential for wider narrative.

GayKat 6 months ago

Wow!... Jump Around A Little!!!

Hallo Rachael!

Lesbian Sex, really?!? Well this is no "La Chatte Heureuse" for sure!

GayKat..

bbaron2274 21 days ago

Totally disjointed,\ and lost interest.

Tell one story from beginning to the end.

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Thanks for reading my profile. What can I say about myself? In 2021, after writing fan fictions and other stories for several years I started writing erotica as a hobby. Some of the stories I've posted here are adult adaptations of earlier stories I've written. More recent ...

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