All Comments on 'Pathways to Submission: Tania Pt. 06'

by RachaelJane

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I get turned off when the line is crossed to draw blood - the story stops being a fun fantasy and becomes too dark for me.

pfboipfboi6 months ago

I feel like the story could have benefited from more dialog and a slower pace. But I loved it anyway; the scenes were so hot! Thank you for writing it!

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Thanks for reading my profile. What can I say about myself? In 2021, after writing fan fictions and other stories for several years I started writing erotica as a hobby. Some of the stories I've posted here are adult adaptations of earlier stories I've written. More recent ...