by LovingF
Wow. An even more unlikeable character, David who deserves an end best described as 'medieval'. LOL, some fiction here!
Eh well. Still did not rate as the score is still very low.
So, when does Paul find out about David? If this took place 5 years earlier, why doesn't Paul immediately plan a rather vigourous, vicious type of revenge? If the cheating went on for quite some time, why is he still with the cheating slut wife? Is he so whipped that he's a doormat? He says he wants revenge, so why hasn't he organised some?
This marriage isn't worth wasting anymore time reading about. Why would anyone try and keep a slag that loves someone else. Divorce her and find someone you don't have to share.