All Comments on 'Paula's First Cum in Public'

Mmmmm…so arousing and fun!

Enjoyable & this is a clever description, 'clit stick.'

Clit stick? Thanks. This was actually suggested by the person who edited it for me.

I like the story. You've captured the essence of a forced feminisation. Fear, shame, guilt as the secret is exploited and used against the victim. The eventual acceptance and even pride toward the end. In the very last bit you switched tense toward the end of the story. In most of the story you described things as if it were talking to an outside party. Me the reader. In the end you switched to saying you as if you were talking to the subject Paul(a). I'd probably keep it as a third person description. All in all a good read.

Thanks for the detailed feedback!