by SmileWhenYouMeanIt
Ok I Know Gemma’s Special I Just KNOW It!!! But this Louise Bish! She Got To Go! Again I Just Know She’s BAD!!! Big Time!!! And the Silver or Gold guy who’s Antagonistic and wants to Kill Mac is BAD news as well!! I Just Know there’s So Many Good Things Ahead BUT I have a Feeling Theres Bout To Be Some Not So Good Ones Before the Really Good ones! Just Like Life!!! It’s Gonna Get Worse Before It Gets Better!! I’m Glad I Don’t Have To Wait Like The One Who Caught Up! I Really Don’t Like To Wait! Especially When There’s So Many Other Stories Out There!!! Keep up the Great Work I Know Shes His Mate! Period Can’t Tell Me Otherwise!! And that sex scene...Steamy Good!! I For Reals HOPE There’s More Like That And or BETTER To Cum! I’m Off To Find Out!
Someone tell me what picchu means!
All I get from google is machu picchu
As I've only today found your stories, let me just tell you that I think they are FANTASTIC!!
But the sex scene was by far one of the hottest, most anticipatory scenes I have ever read.
Cant wait to continue on with the rest. Keep up the great work.
Nicci
It was a really sexy love scene, I loved the bit where he started to go a bit out of control and was trying to hook her closer with his leg. Amazing. Hope you continue such a great story and thanks for all so far.
Super brilliant chapter! You outdo yourself every time! Loved every word and can't wait for more. :) Thank you, thank you for sharing your writing talent with us.
please please dont end this to soon. amazing how I feel like Im right there, apart of what is happening.
thankyou
Really great sex scene, I really liked it and have no idea how you're going to end it, so that they can be with each other. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I think I just creamed my panties at work. Thanks, I needed that. It has been a long while since a story has been able to.....corrupt me that much. Please, do continue.
why sadly? Because now I have to wait like everyone else for the next chapter. This is a really great story. I like the fact that Mac fought to keep Gamma safe from all that is going on. Also there is the fact that no human has survived the change w/o going rouge or dieing. And now that we know why Nick is after Gamma, what will the council do? And is Gamma safe w/Louise watching over her? Louise seems to have eyes for Mac. So many questions that only the next chapters can will bring. Again now that I have caught up I'm stuck waiting w/everyone else. At least it's nice to know that you have the story worked out in your head for a lot more chapters!!!!
Great sex scene. Cant wait to see what happens with Gemma and Mac. I know they will end up together. Please hurry w the next chapters