All Comments on 'PAX-13 Pt. 01'

It had an intriguing start. The end yen had a disappointing let down. I suppose it's difficult to set up your next chapter and end in a high note. The story has great potential. I like your writing style, direct and quickly paced. Please keep writing Panther fan.

Looking forward to pt.2

You're a great writer, and the story is well-paced. I feel the way John feels at the end of this chapter: on the verge of something and excited for what's coming next. Can't wait for part 2!

I can see a big adventure ahead for him.