All Comments on 'Payal ki Jhankar Ch. 05'

Excellent continuation on a superb story line. Keep it up.

The execution falls a bit short of the above qualities, though quite good by Literotica standards. Washington D.C. Is rife with cynical humor & intricate power plays. In these aspects the story did not accurately reflect it's chosen setting.

I would recommend Robert Caro's books on L.B.J. as a partial guide to the former & ' Cadilac Jack by Larry McMurtry for the latter. Still this was a VERY worthy read. It was quite daring of the author to juxtapose East & West political realities in this way. I thank the author.

Have to admit that I was skeptical about an erotic story being written set in the feudal lifestyle, as being possible, let alone being good. Of course I had not counted on MughalPunjabi's amazing and fertile imagination. This story is truly fabulous. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for writing this MP!

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