All Comments on 'Pearl Beds'

by poisoniv1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Um...

Dude...what's with the ending? All this nice buildup of feeling, the sensuality of a pearl massage, and then she's all like, "No, I don't want these" and he's cool with it and he dumps all his hard work back into the ocean and they go off to fuck other people. Really...not what I expected...not at all...

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

1 star - no comment for an unfinished story - Where is FTDS when you need a damn ending?

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