by poisoniv1
Dude...what's with the ending? All this nice buildup of feeling, the sensuality of a pearl massage, and then she's all like, "No, I don't want these" and he's cool with it and he dumps all his hard work back into the ocean and they go off to fuck other people. Really...not what I expected...not at all...
1 star - no comment for an unfinished story - Where is FTDS when you need a damn ending?