All Comments on 'Pennies'

Good story line, nice character development, hot sex beautifully and erotically described.

But: You meant DAMN, not dam and YOU'RE is short for you are, not YOUR.

More please.

Snooker123, A wonderful and erotic story. It's written with the flair of a fine painting with so many colors, moods, & emotions. That is the reason I give the story a "4". The story kept building and building and building, but for me it was one huge erotic foreplay without the huge explosion the reader is looking for at the end. Maybe it's because I'm a man and I need that payoff at the end? I would love to know what your female readers think.