All Comments on 'Perfect Wife Forced Into Cuckolding'

I actually enjoyed the plot. It's an interesting foray into different aspects of relationships. The wanna be cuckold, the woman who I'm not sure what that character wants and of course, the aged neighbor. If you're so disposed, I'm interested to see where a sequel leads.

But you transition of your characters is too quick (in my opinion). You're dealing with some deep (smiles) character issues. Mark seems to go from anger / jealousy to plotting and enjoying his wife's extramarital activities (like the deviant many of us are). He walks out (from where?) asking what he'd been given. Did he accidentally drink some of the same concoction - we don't know. The same things with Jenny. She is going from prude to loose several times through the story. Sharing the details of her past with the neighbor but, not her husband..... I think those are a stretching things a little. Entirely not hard to imagine but - to make this believable - give your readers more backup, what's going on in her mind to bring that about? These are hard to follow - almost like we're looking at a "Jekyll/Hyde" thing. Help us readers make those transitions. Perhaps with more inner-conflict discussions with the characters.

You might also do better with an editor. Small things, but with a hard-to-follow chain of events....it detracts form your effort to carry us readers on a journey.

I sincerely hope you continue to write and, perhaps provide a sequel...smiles. Sorry - I cant give it five stars, but i can honestly rate it four! You transported me into the lives of the characters and have this reader *interested* in the outcomes; and isn't that what most writers want? Thank-you

This was a Good Story Very naughty With a drunken fun little slut.

Can't wait to read more along this theme. Ignore the troll reviews and keep writing.

You are not alone with your fantasy, which is why I enjoyed your story immensely, and can only hope you have a part 2.

Thank you for your wonderful contribution.

Loved it and hope to see more from you. I loved the part where he is tricking her to do it.

This story is pretty hot tbh. Wish it could continue.

In the story you said Jenny was looking out across to Mr. Harris house through the window. And that Mark knew exactly what Jenny was searching for, and that

Mark thought Jenny was a naught girl for doing that. So my questions are. What exactly was it that Jenny was searching for when she looked out to Mr. Harris house across the street at night? And why would that make her a naughty girl for doing that?

loved your story hope to see you add part 2 soon!

Very well written, great plot, one of my own favourite fantasies. I feel certain that you have the ability to write more, Mr Mac

Fantastic story - one of the best I’ve read. I was desperately hoping there was more or let her stories you have written. I hope you will do more!

Needs a part 2 and more...

Ditto what orater1 posted.

Good story, a little disjointed but good theme. A couple of proofreads and an editir willl help tremendously with continuity. Some sections went on a little too long, where other sections needed more detail.

Keeo writing.

Story is good, needs editing, but really wish these Anonymous troll cowards would go back to reading the Bible instead of erotic porn and especially themes they don't care for.

This is by far my favourite story on literotica.

It's extremely erotic because it's so realistic and subtle. I love the gradual build up: of a husband who is really turned on by cuckold but who's wife is not, and thus needs to apply subtle but progressive pressure to get her to do it. In doing so it causes marital tension, which would be expected. I also love his horny feelings when giving the dirty old man help with his perverted desires - placing the photos for him to find, etc. I get the feeling the husband is torn as well: on the one hand he's turned on and wants to keep going, but on the other he's not sure how he'd feel if it happened as he does adore and worship his wife so much (partly why the thought of cuckold, esp by a disgusting older man, turns him on so much).

Please please please right a sequel. I think you should spend a lot of time dwelling on the risk of pregnancy, and eventual ambiguity. Jenny could get pregnant. The couple are rejoiced and so happy, but also in turmoil, considering the worst case scenario. As a result they avoid Mr Harris like the plague, not giving him wind that she's pregnant. They lose all contact with him. They want to move areas but can't because of their financial constraints. Eventually they can't hide it any longer. Mr Harris finds out and becomes obsessed. Meanwhile jenny finds out about her husbands betrayal and their marriage suffers. Mark has to work long hours and a pregnant jenny has to fend off an obsessed and relentless Mr Harris, who could also be the father of her child. And eventually it all comes to a head

Infantile

Absolutely loved this story! Best story I’ve come across in a while. Really hope to read a part 2 and would hope that it goes to the next level. Possibly with the neighbor and his friend. This story did not disappoint.

need a sequel

The story was hard to follow the cuckold was a idiot. For me the story was unbelievable

I thought it was hot me and my Husband talked about my sister in law Dad he was always flirting with me big man 350 or more big strong looking my husband is black and my sister in law dad is white well we were at a party one weekend he was flirting as always he didnt drink were had rented a hotel room my husband was outside smoking a cigarette he followed me in the kitchen and grabed me pushed me up on the fridge and kissed me i kissed him back he grab my tit and i let him then we went back to the party .When my husband came back inside he told me to ask him to drive us to the hotel he wanted to see Terry use me rough. So after more drinks he took us to the hotel. In the car he told Terry that he wanted terry to come up to the room with us . when we got to the room he told Terry he saw him kiss me in the kitchen and to act like he was not there and finsh what he started

Good story! How about a second chapter?

What Hell!! I didn’t see cuckold in this story??? I saw drugs and taken advantage/rape. I can see a 1-2 more chapters with the open theme, wife ask where video camera/and video he was suppose to make, I can see maybe couple chapters out of those

O well doubt there will be!!!

Defo needs a follow up