All Comments on 'Perhaps One Step Too Far'

by OntarioCavegirl

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Well done

I think you have a good story line going. The insertion of another female and a male might lead to some interesting twists.

I especially enjoyed the opening that she presented in the first story. Pun intended.

Keep it going, please. Don

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos8 months ago

She should be fired.

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