All Comments on 'Permini - Ch. 04: The Devil Within'

by Neradark

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not too sure if you have submitted multiple sessions and cannot follow suggestions previously made. Edits are required. Especially edits that include adjustments made through Proof Reading and Spell Checking.

Both of these are required on this otherwise very interesting chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

Any other chapters coming?

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