by escriterra
Great story. Lets hope we don't have to wait another two years for a new chapter
This was a little slow for me. Otherwise, the story and your writing continue to intrigue me.
great one. Lets hope we don't have to wait another 2 years before a new chapter.
@escriterra Your story is awesome. When are you going to be getting another chapter ?
After the long initial offering of 1-4, I thought the story might be moving along a bit too slow. Now, I want to go back to that pace, stretching out the enjoyment of reading about the play of tempting situation, fantasies around the moments together, adapting to the need to make the real-life experiences fill in the fantasy and suggest even more, and -- probably what is the clearest absence -- trying to explain the situation and their thoughts to someone else.
Still very enjoyable ... still very arousing ... and I'm looking forward to more.