All Comments on 'Pervy Hot Tub Wishes'

by jackingboy1976

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Ready2BServicedReady2BServicedalmost 8 years ago
SMH

I'm disappointed. I feel like he could have improved himself, Rob and Margie. All three are nasty! At the least thickened and lengthened Rob and his own cocks and improved them stamina.

zena99zena99almost 8 years ago
Thanks

Great tale. I always enjoy your work. Now if only I could find that genie....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Everybody give it a one star rating

Let's see how low a rating we can give this loser story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Wondering which character the author relates to most. Rob and Randy deserved castration for their remarks at the beginning--absolutely repulsive. Really didn't care for them to be rewarded for being the least human people in this story. Reg storytelling? The sex (pg 4-6) was ridiculously obnoxious. Who gets off with all caps for 3 pages straight?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

He should have wished his dick bigger!

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