All Comments on 'Pet Sitting'

by Hypnospects

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

FUCK I need more snake-centric lit.

AerandorAerandorover 2 years ago

Outstanding story! Would have loved a little more build up before Jackson arrived, but that's my only critique. Crossing my fingers you will write more parts to it!

PolyDomDaddy306PolyDomDaddy306over 2 years ago

Well thought out story, I hope there will be additional chapters.

richie78richie78over 2 years ago

Decent story though it would have benefited from a proof reader as some of the typos were jarring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was such a hot read, I nearly came just from reading this

GarnettGibsonGarnettGibsonabout 1 year ago

Love it! A bit of proofreading would make it nearly damn perfect.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Sequel please

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous