All Comments on 'Pete and Denise'

what a beautiful start to your love story. Please continue.

Very nice; romantic.

hope there's more soon please....

Very good story telling. Some have it... Some don't!

You obviously do.

I can;t wait until the next episode

...despite the funny error: public hair instead of pubic hair.

5*

Luv it, hon!... Sara CD

I especially loved the story as in my first name is also Pete.

Would love to see a second part.

Part two please. Would love to read more about Pete and Denise.

That is a great start to what looks like a wonderful romance story. I hope that you will find the time to continue writing.

Great story here. A few people already mentioned it, but aside from some of the grammatical errors or typos, really loved it. I'm not saying anything new, but I hope you continue this, if not, continue writing at least!

That was a very romantic story and I liked it a lot. I hope you write more.

I liked it but i thought it was kind of quick. Also in real life Pete wouldn't get away with just giving Denise a hand job. He seemed to be okay with her being a trans but then he didn't explore or satisfy her oraly. I think it would have been better if he had returned the favor before they had anal sex.

Excellent beginning to a story here. I agree with many of the other comments, this should be the first part of a more involved story. You've created an interesting relationship here that I'd love to see explored further, inside and outside the bedroom.

If you become concerned with the grammar/spelling criticism, consider finding an editor. A second pair of eyes can often catch things we miss.

I was really interested to read your story ... and wasn't disappointed XD but why oh why did I start reading it in the library?! I'm gonna have to wait a good ten minutes before I can move from here ;-). Thanks TG xxx

Great story, well thought out, but do agree with others here that the 2 of them got to the sexual side of things PDQ...BUT, would love to read a follow up.. Was it a set up all along by Mike & Chelsea..? Thank you TG.

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