by Bazzle
Fantastic story! I felt like it was a two for one, and I was totally invested in both storylines. The setting was fantastic and I love how you incorporated the lake. Before I found your story, I had read the original inspiration story and the overlaps were beautifully done (I searched for ghost after writing my own ghost story). There is something sexy about an invisible man!
Nice pair, Bazzle. I liked how you wove the two stories together. Well done.
Russ