All Comments on 'Photo Finish Ch. 01'

I am so sorry to say this but this was 5% sexy to me and 95% pure laugh myself silly at him. Repressed and guilty man has to deal with two women who believe in forgetting about the guilt or repressing themselves.

interesting plot line, highly readable, and intriguing. 5 stars.

Get part 2 out!!

You must hurry up with part 2

I loved that story.

Please, please, please continue

You're a very good, no. Great writer!!!