All Comments on 'Pi R Squared'

by ZackOShea

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Afraid I've been out for a bit and haven't commented (as I have on earlier posts). I should say I was ruminating about where the next story 'tension' would occur so to speak. The tension between Eddie and Pi built nicely over the first few entries, but that tension between the two could only last so long unless something else could be introduced -- which I think you deftly placed at the very last. Anxious to see how the story shall turn.

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you, a bit of foreshadowing and mystery helps either time. I knew these last two parts were going to be the weakest - lots of character and setting introduction tends to dilute the drive of a story but it's something that also alas has to be done. I hope you and others keep enjoy it.

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