by weftandwarp
this is a bit stilted and rough. Hard to hold to with incomplete thoughts and sentences.
Potential for the story remains beneath the surface.
Not enough here to give a decent rating.
Revenge is a dish best served hot in this tale of a Pick Up to spite a boyfriend. As if to
make the message clear she photographs the tryst and.makes sure her boyfriend gets the picture. Short and sweet and to the point, Pick up is an excellent slice of life story in the digital age.
Weak story, bad writing. Maybe I was a little harsh, it might qualify as 10 grade, the did use the fuck word.