All Comments on 'Pillaging with the Orc Hordes Ch. 01'

Terrible spelling, the grammar and sentence structure is poor, the story lacks any real depth and it lacks even the basic aspect of sex. Oh she got fingered, whoopie. Also, if she was tied down by both legs and her hands above her head, how did she get up to walk to the old man? You expect the reader the believe the orcs or halfling would just cut her loose and give her a chance to flee? This was a poorly written story, in the future find someone to proof read before posting and save yourself, and the poor unsuspecting reader, the embarrassment of having to endure this painful flaming pile.

It has an interesting plot concept and it IS a non-consensual story for a change. Most of what gets published on this list (after the Literotica censors get done with it) is little more then BDSM.

Keep writing!