All Comments on 'Pillow Talk'

by Salteena

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Disturbing

Very disturbing. It sorta gave me the chills. Oh well. Please keep writing (with more than fantasies if you can).

ddpmanddpmanalmost 18 years ago
We all need a pillow talk

Saltenna you spun a heart warming tale with Pillow Talk. When you come right down to it most of us do not know what our partner's history really has been . Or what their dreams and imaginings are. You put me to shame as to the lack of communication with my wife. Keep writing and I will keep reading

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great

What a couple!

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great dialogue

You make your characters sound so natural even when they're talking about the wildest things. Nice progression of stories. It really builds up.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Damn

Truthfully I'm kind of ashamed that I read this tale. No outsiders should know the pillow talk of a really perverted loving husband and wife.

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