All Comments on 'Pilot in Command Ch. 04'

I love the story and hope you will continue, although the f/f aspect doesn’t interest me. Would like them to explore BDSM together before involving other people.

This is great, truly erotic writing. If it were a competition, I' d be jealous. As it is, just filled with admiration.

A wonderful story, she's finding her sexuality & wants to explore.

He's a mature man that seems capable to show her the joys of journey, including BDSM.

I hope you continue, you have a lot to work with.

Thanks for your writing.

Loved it. Keep going

So far Great, thanks for your efforts, so many possibilities, so many paths.

Love this, like it to get darker though

Sexy peek into a blossoming old/young relationship. You made me a bit nervous in the shower there for a minute. I took a spill in the shower once, now I always look down to make sure there's a no-skid surface there for some traction. Thanks for taking the time to finish the story. Trying to get the scene out of your head and onto paper can be exhausting.

Satisfying but maybe Adriano comes to play?

There's a wife in there too. Maybe she likes to watch?

What a great and lovely novella. The characterisation is excellent and the emotions very believable. The author should be strongly encouraged to continue this story. It would seem that there is still much to go and enthusiastic readers waiting. Look froward to more interesting chapters.

Please continue

i like it so far. please continue writing more chapters. want to see which way you will go with the story. you certainly left a lot of avenues open.