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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
dialogue

you need to have dialogue or people get discouraged reading your story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Dialogue?

Dont agree with the previous post

If you can paint such a vivid picture there's no need for dialogue

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