All Comments on 'Pins Ch. 03'

by Reefkeeper

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
nice twist

interesting twist with the nieces. looking forward the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I don't mind reading a lot of girl names

when they are on the inviting list of a party of mine but it makes it really difficult to follow a story. + erotic couplings seems a bit out of place when you sell girls to a sexslave organisation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hmmmm

Raunchy! Its hard to even decide whether I'm totally disgusted or extremely turned on. *laughs* either way atleast you have a story line & this far have been consistent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
your on a roll

Wow didn't take her long to loose her morals.. but a very erotic story no less.. heres looking for the next chapter and see what mess these family members end up in

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous