All Comments on 'Piper Learns to Share'

You're a hell of a writer. Story left me feeling dirty and sour though.

This is a 5-star story until the end, when it becomes unnecessarily degrading and sour. It seems like the author hates all the characters, which makes me less interested in any sequels.

What Anonymous said

I like your stories. They're well-written and follow "show, don't tell" a lot better than a lot on this site. You could hold the 'a' key for five minutes and submit it and I'll still read it.

This is arousing and well written. That said, it starts out as a beautiful story about young love, and ends up being about how a young girl gets degraded by her scumbag roommate and her boyfriend, in a way that's likely to turn her into another broken, college thot, unable to ever find happiness in a relationship. It's profane. I'm not sure what to make of the fact that the protagonist is a "gender studies" major. I think I'm supposed to conclude that this is what she deserves.

Well, to each their own. I’ve always said writers should write stories for themselves, first, and an audience second. A few people had an issue with the end. To me Spector_Dugan was simply being true to the characters he created. I don’t need a sequel necessarily, and don’t even know that’s the highest compliment I could pay. I sure loved the realistic reluctance, seduction, and overwhelming physical response to what was set up exceptionally well as a taboo situation. I especially enjoyed the writing describing Piper’s physical response to getting fucked by Colt, and all the little decisions along the way that led her there. The ending seemed completely appropriate to the story to me. ~S

I liked the entire story, ending and all, and I'd love to see a sequel. I actually think Evil Roommate would have been a better title. I'd love to see what Anna would lead Piper into. This is the first one of your stories I've read. It won't be the last.

This is CONSIDERABLY better than your previous works. Good job.

I really enjoyed this story, I hope there’s a sequel or two. Watching Piper develop and open her horizons was a lot and fun, and it was well done. Nice pacing, decent characters and good action.

“Anonymous, troubling”

You realise this is a Pornographic story right? Its fantasy to pull your pud to...

Just asking....

Wow, terrific. Spector, I have enjoyed several of your stories and immedately thought I'd like this one. Then I read some of the reviews and was put off. But having read it, this is great. Like the quote in my sig

"The heated act of sex often expunges judgment, pushing the participants into territory they hadn't previously contemplated. " -Natasha Vargas-Cooper

great job. But seriously though, Daniel sending his girl home alone after their first time? WHO DOES THAT?

Would’ve loved to see Piper get bred by Colt, maybe next time she’ll make a “bad” choice.

Horny-ish. Went w Piper’s experience...

Great realistic characterizations and story arc. Feels like there should be a few dozen tales with these 4 leads. And there's Colt's two buddies who need to get in on the action. But this girl needs to get on the Pill and practice safe sex.

Please do a sequel of this story

Very well written! Nice build up of sensuous teasing all the way to the main act. The descriptions of the feelings and emotions during the stages of sex are so realistic that I felt like I was the character. Thank you for a very hot story!

I am exhausted!

Great description of a Fantastic Fuck scene.

Great writing and story line.

Love MORE!

How about an Epilogue chapter?

Will Piper and Dani stay together or we have another sex show?

I hate being left without an ending .

Great story, beautifully written, too. Looking forward to more. Thanks!

That was just an amazing read, so vivid.

Ah yes! Young love comes of age. A perfect set up for some follow on stories. 5

It really is a testament to the author when you want, nay, you DEMAND....MOAR!!!

Wow! Now THAT was a tour de force! Really beautifully done and, by and large, believable. The most enjoyable story I've read thus far on Lit. Thanks for some really horny fun!

I don't like how u always pick someone to demean by some selfish narsasis.

Whew....that was intense. Strip UNO? For reals...once the Poly crew and Pressing Matters teams are wrapped, Piper Pressing and poking at the Poly could be a new journey! 😀

I believe there is hope for Danny and Piper! They now have some real knowledge and experience. They just have to stay focused on each other and building their relationship! Danny can ultimately be Pipers God in the bedroom! If they keep building the foundation and realize that it’s not at all necessary to go out side the relationship to get each others needs met —then if they do it will just be side fun and not the seeds of their relationship dissolving.

excellent, well written, well paced,, the transformation of piper to a sub was so subtle i hardly noticed til it was full on..very erotic story,,

Most excellent! thank you.

more please!

Holy FUUUUUUUCK! This was HOT! Would love to read more about Piper's next adventure!

Hot as hell. Too bad she didn’t make him use a condom. As it is, the story’s unfinished. If viewed as just a learning experience, then there’s hope for them. If they continue, then it’s the beginning of the end.

Bill S.