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But was the guy still wearing his shoes and socks in the shower? :-)

I have never liked stories which needed an editor, as I tend to think that ......

A) someone who cannot edit their own stories shouldn't bother writing

B) the story can become a bad mixture of two people's ideas and styles

So here we have a story with a glaring mistake in the third paragraph.........

''just the right about of cleavage'' ????????????????

Surely author or editor should have spotted it.

There might be more mistakes, but I stopped after a few more paragraphs as I lost interest in the whole thing.

I love pizza delivery video clips and have a girlfriend who intends to do something with a delivery man, but I could not relate to this particular set of events or way of writing, not sure which it was.